- From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Thu, 11 Aug 2011 11:28:51 +0200
- To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Cc: "Arch, Andrew" <Andrew.Arch@finance.gov.au>, Denis Boudreau <dboudreau@webconforme.com>, Helle Bjarnø <jor@servicestyrelsen.dk>, Emmanuelle Gutiérrez y Restrepo <emmanuelle@sidar.org>, Liam McGee <liam.mcgee@communis.co.uk>, Jennifer Sutton <jsuttondc@gmail.com>, wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hello Shawn, Jennifer and all, I find this introduction very clear. I agree with Andrew's suggestions in his previous email. Nevertheless, I have some comments on the document at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/policy-updates 1. I think that something is missing after the sentence: "The absence of information for a given country does not necessarily indicate a lack of legislative activity in that country." I would expect to read what can be done if the reader is aware of legislation in a specific country that is not listed here. Maybe give again the link to how to submit information on a country that is not listed there. Or link to the section further in the document entitled "Updates welcome". 2. The sentence that follows this sentence does not seem logical to me after having said that some countries are not listed. The sentence is: "Related information available from WAI includes:" Information about what? Missing countries? Things that are not there? Legislation in general? So I suggest that this sentence be detailed as follows, for example: [Begin of suggestion] "WAI provides following information related with implementing Web Accessibility in state or organizational policies:" [End of suggestion] followed by the three links to standards harmonization, developing organizational policies and authorized translations. 3. At last, I see that you have added update notes for the different countries. I had volounteered to update France section. I see that you have included updates from Aurélien, co-writer of the reference text for implementing WCAG 2.0 in French administrations, RGAA. How is the status of these updates? Would you like me to format the update and/or reformulate some wording now or later? I am available till tomorrow, then again on August 31. So let me know how urgent it is. Have a nice day and hearing from you tomorrow on the call. Best regards Sylvie Le 11/08/2011 03:40, Shawn Henry a écrit : > To those particularly interested in the Policies page, > > Jennifer and I have edited the Introduction at > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/policy-updates > > We welcome feedback now. We plan to go over it with Judy before we > bring it to EOWG. > > Helle, I'd particularly like your input on: "Some are regional > policies, some are national legislation, and some are government > directives." I put the last part as a placeholder, but don't like it, > especially in context with the rest of the Introduction. How would you > categorize the situation in countries like Denmark? > > Regards, > ~Shawn >
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