- From: Andrew Arch <andrew@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 16 Sep 2010 21:04:31 +0100
- To: Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>
- CC: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Sharron, Thank you for the comments you provided recently on the Training Resource Suite. WRT to the comment about the 'clumsiness' and clarity of the Presentations page, we've done some 'de-clutering' that I hope addresses this. Hopefully the removal some brackets (and bracketed material) and de-emphasising of others, along with the removal of the in-line links from the 'outline' will help the clarity issue. These changes are on the EOWG agenda for 17/Sept. WRT your Workshop comments about who might present, what background they have, and that they need to customise the material for their audience, I hope the additional notes in the "Important Notes" section addresses this. Again, this is for EO discussion on 17/Sept. WRT seeking daily feedback, we've already got suggestions about reviewing/clarifying at the end of each session, and having reviews at the end/start of each day. Are these sufficient, or do you have more suggestions? Hope you like the updated Draft, but feel free to provide more comments. Thanks, Andrew -- Andrew Arch Web Accessibility and Ageing Specialist http://www.w3.org/People/Andrew/ http://www.w3.org/WAI/WAI-AGE/
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