Comments on updated draft

Good morning,

	I've just taken a look at the updated draft of Contacting Organisations About Inaccessible Websites. I'm really pleased to see that a stronger emphasis has been placed on the value of positive feedback.

	Overall the document seems to flow well. I think that it offers just the right level of support and guidance all the way through. Great work!

	The only thing I noticed is a (very minor) typo. In the Consider Your Approach section, you'll find the following phrase:

"Often is is best when..."

	There's a double "is" in there, when I'm guessing it should be:

"Often it is best when..."

  

Regards,
Léonie.

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