- From: Yeliz Yesilada <yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk>
- Date: Thu, 2 Oct 2008 14:18:36 +0100
- To: shawn@w3.org
- Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
Hi Shawn, Thanks for your comments. I have addressed them both, please let me know if you are happy with the changes (<http://www.w3.org/WAI/mobile/ experiences-new> and <http://www.w3.org/WAI/mobile/experiences-new- format>). On 9 Sep 2008, at 21:15, shawn@w3.org wrote: > > SLH2: Now that you have reworded them and most start with "User" it is > easier to tell that they are experiences, and I agree not to add it. > Consider further rewording to make them more similar, perhaps all > starting > with "User". For example: > * Cant operate or interact correctly with content, misses prompts, > makes > mistakes. > > User cant operate or interact correctly with content, misses prompts, > makes mistakes. > * Missing, or inappropriate, or long page title means user cannot scan > easily get an overview. > Users cannot easily scan to get an overview > because of missing, inappropriate, or long page title. > (and others) I have changed all of them so that they are all in a consistent manner. > 2. SLH: error in the code above - before SCROLLING is </li><>li>]]. > YY - Unfortunately, I cannot find this error. > > SLH2: I'm seeing this: > <li>MWBP 1.0 Best Practice: <a > href="http://www.w3.org/TR/mobile-bp/ > #PAGE_SIZE_USABLE">PAGE_SIZE_USABLE</a> > and</li><li> <a > href="http://www.w3.org/TR/mobile-bp/#SCROLLING">SCROLLING</a>.</li> > > Which should be: > <li>MWBP 1.0 Best Practice: <a > href="http://www.w3.org/TR/mobile-bp/ > #PAGE_SIZE_USABLE">PAGE_SIZE_USABLE</a> > and <a > href="http://www.w3.org/TR/mobile-bp/#SCROLLING">SCROLLING</a>.</li> I found this and changed, thanks. Regards, Yeliz.
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