Re: Experiences document - survey Comments - questions?

Hi Shadi,

On 30 Jul 2008, at 18:11, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote:
>
> Consider "Device is *often* used ..." (added the word "often") or  
> similar so that the second sentence does not sound as absolute.

OK,  I also think adding "often" would be better.
>
> Do you mean to say "Blind or color blind users can't perceive  
> *color*" or "can't perceive *non-text content*" as opposed to just  
> "*content*"?

I actually mean "non-text content" so I will change that.

> Works much better but I wonder if the second sentence could be  
> split. For example to say "Mobile browsers can behave differently  
> to Desktop browsers, for example due to network and processing  
> capabilities. Auto-refreshed pages may also have cost implications  
> if they are left open or put unnoticed into the background."

OK, this reads better so I will use this one.

Regards,
Yeliz.

Received on Thursday, 31 July 2008 05:53:04 UTC