- From: Yeliz Yesilada <yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk>
- Date: Wed, 30 Jul 2008 16:23:08 +0100
- To: Lisa Pappas <Lisa.Pappas@sas.com>
- Cc: "wai-eo-editors@w3.org" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Lisa, On 30 Jul 2008, at 16:00, Lisa Pappas wrote: > I am sorry -- I meant to write the suggested revision this way: > > Mobile users often turn off sound in public places (trains, > hotel > lobbies) or cannot hear in noisy places (streets, nightclubs). > > Does that make sense and is it more clear? I will change it as you suggested. I think it's very clear. > Regarding the capitalization, let's check with Shawn or possibly > Michael to see if there is a W3C WAI style standard. At a minimum, > a document should be internally consistent, and, ideally -- if it's > part of a library -- consistent with its peer documents. OK, I guess Shawn can tell us more about that. They are capitalised though in the MWBP 1.0 document (<http://www.w3.org/TR/mobile-bp/>) so I prefer to keep it consistent with the original document. Regards, Yeliz.
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