- From: Yeliz Yesilada <yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk>
- Date: Wed, 30 Jul 2008 15:38:53 +0100
- To: Lisa Pappas <Lisa.Pappas@sas.com>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
Hi Lisa, Thanks so much for your comments in the surveyed. I have addressed most of your comments, however I have a question for the following two (see YY below): priority: editor's discretion location: Perceivable, table, row 3 current wording: Mobile users often in public places (trains, hotel lobbies) turn off sound; often in noisy places (streets, nightclubs) can't hear. suggested revision: Mobile users often turn off sound in public places (trains, hotel lobbies) or in noisy places (streets, nightclubs). rationale: reads more clearly, better translation YY: If I make the suggested change, then that will change the meaning, but would you be happy if I change it like this: "Mobile users cannot hear because they turn off sound or they are in public places such as train stations and hotel lobbies." priority: editor's discretion location: Global, MWBP 1.0 columns current wording: links are in all caps, not initial caps, as others (WCAG 1 and 2) suggested revision: Use initial caps in link text to MWBP 1.0 rationale: Readability, consistency YY: In the original Mobile Web Best Practices (MWBP) document, they are capitalised and to keep it consistent, I would prefer to keep them capitalised. Would you mind if we keep them capitalised or would you like to discuss this at the EO meeting? Regards, Yeliz -------------------------------------------------------- School of Computer Science The University of Manchester Manchester M13 9PL URL: http://www.cs.man.ac.uk/~yesilady/ Tel: +44 (0) 161 275 6239 Fax: +44 (0) 845 139 5599 --------------------------------------------------------
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