quick comments on WCAG 2.0 presentation

Hi Shawn,

Used the slides at a presentation today and it worked very well! It was 
good to have such a comprehensive set of slides that can be cut-down 
according to the audience needs. Some low priority comments though:


Slide #9: in this part of the presentation "Improvements through 
revisions" only refers to removing jargon and not the technical 
improvements. Later we talk about some of the technical improvements but 
do not relate them back to the revisions.
-Suggestion: use the notes in slide 9 and in other slides to clarify 
this link to the presenters


Side #28: there is very little guidance in the notes section about what 
"more movement within defined parameters" means -I had a hard time until 
I noticed all the "or"-clauses in the SCs (although 2.3.2 threw me off 
again because it doesn't have an "or")
-Suggestion: explain more in the notes section


Slide #59: great to have this "people slant" in there but need to work 
on the "videos" bullet -I changed that to "other online articles and 
videos" since there are also non-WAI resources on how PWD use the Web


Slide #69: really loved the idea of giving the audience a "start here" 
push but this slide didn't really cut it -the audience were too advanced 
for starting at the overview (especially after this presentation) yet 
quick reference is not really ready to go at this stage. Not sure if one 
can do anything about this..


Regards,
   Shadi


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