[wbs] response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Instructions for the WCAG 2.0 Presentation (formerly Directive Overview) 1'

The following answers have been successfully submitted to 'EOWG Call for
Review: Instructions for the WCAG 2.0 Presentation (formerly Directive
Overview) 1' (Education and Outreach Working Group) for Shadi Abou-Zahra.



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Version
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Which version are these comments for? The version date is at the bottom of
the page, after "DRAFT in progress: Content last updated $Date:"  


 * ( ) Date: 2007/08/28 15:42:27
 * (x) Latest Date: 2007/09/02 03:02:29





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Acceptance of Instructions for WCAG 2.0 Presentation
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Based on the current version, please answer below. Note that you can
change your answer; for example, if there are edits later.


 * ( ) I accept this version of the document as is
 * (x) I accept this version of the document, and suggest changes below
 * ( ) I accept this version of the document only if the changes below are
implemented
 * ( ) I do not accept this version of the document because of the
comments below
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)





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Comments
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Comments on the document, formatted as described above.

Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
priority: [editor's discretion]
location: "The WCAG 2.0 Presentation" section
current wording: "The presentation "slides" include extensive notes to
assist presenters, and they are available for anyone to use as described
in Permission and Reference."
suggested revision: "The presentation "slides" are designed for anyone who
wants to give a presentation on WCAG 2.0 but is also useful for others who
want to learn about WCAG 2.0."
rationale: clarifying who the target audience is, and how they can use
these slides.




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OLD QUESTION, DO NOT ANSWER [Title]
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Some ideas for title:   WCAG 2.0 Presentation Directive Overview,   WCAG
2.0 Presentation Instructions,   WCAG 2.0 Presentation Directions. Do you
have other ideas? What do you think of these ideas?  
Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 



These answers were last modified on 5 September 2007 at 20:03:49 U.T.C.
by Shadi Abou-Zahra

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/wcag20pres-cover1/ until 2007-09-05.

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