- From: Richard Schwerdtfeger <schwer@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Fri, 23 Nov 2007 20:45:58 -0600
- To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Cc: Al Gilman <Alfred.S.Gilman@IEEE.org>, Michael Cooper <cooper@w3.org>, Lisa Pappas <Lisa.Pappas@sas.com>, wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <OF54CACF30.CB67BB07-ON8625739D.000F24F6-8625739D.000F2A40@us.ibm.com>
Thank you Shawn. Rich Schwerdtfeger Distinguished Engineer, SWG Accessibility Architect/Strategist Chair, IBM Accessibility Architecture Review Board blog: http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/blogs/page/schwer Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> To 11/23/2007 03:21 Richard PM Schwerdtfeger/Austin/IBM@IBMUS, Lisa Pappas <Lisa.Pappas@sas.com> cc wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>, Michael Cooper <cooper@w3.org>, Al Gilman <Alfred.S.Gilman@IEEE.org> Subject Editorial comments for WAI-ARIA documents Rich & Lisa, Here are a few suggestions from EOWG's brief review of http://www.w3.org/WAI/PF/aria-practices/ I think all of these will apply to the revised documents that you are working on. * Use "WAI-ARIA" (as opposed to only "ARIA") in the title, the headings, and the beginning of each section. See "Terminology and usage guidance ..." under http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-aria-docs#notes ) [http://www.w3.org/2007/11/05-eo-minutes.html#action16] * In the beginning add a link to the Overview doc http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/aria.php [http://www.w3.org/2007/11/05-eo-minutes.html#action19] * Add [Contents] link at the top, e.g., http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG20/ [http://www.w3.org/2007/11/05-eo-minutes.html#action14] * Reconsider the heading levels -- the subheadings at a specific level don't seem parallel. Consider making the TOC a tree control. :-) If not, consider providing a short TOC that has only the top level (to provide an overview of the content of the document), and then a detailed TOC -- or maybe a single TOC that has only 2 levels. [http://www.w3.org/2007/11/05-eo-minutes.html#action18] * Provide the reference for the 55% stat and any others [http://www.w3.org/2007/11/05-eo-minutes.html#action20] All for now... Best, ~Shawn
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