- From: WBS Mailer on behalf of <jack.r.welsh@boeing.com>
- Date: Thu, 16 Mar 2006 01:55:01 +0000
- To: jack.r.welsh@boeing.com,wai-eo-editors@w3.org
Here are the answers submitted to 'EOWG Call for Review: Improving the Accessibility of Your Web Site, 2006 March' (Education and Outreach Working Group) for Jack Welsh. --------------------------------- Support for Improving the Accessibility of Your Web Site ---- * ( ) I accept this version of the document as is * (x) I accept this version of the document, and suggest changes below * ( ) I accept this version of the document only with the changes below * ( ) I do not accept this version of the document because of the comments below * ( ) I abstain (not vote) --------------------------------- Comments ---- Comments on the document, formatted as described above. Location: Optimizing Knowledge and Skills Current wording: It is often best to combine educating existing staff with bringing in outside expertise. . . Suggested revision: It is often best to combine educating existing staff by bringing in outside expertise. . . Rationale: I think we want the word 'by' instead of 'with'. Location: Next: Strategic Planning Current wording: After you have repaired the major accessibility barriers on your Web site, there are several things you can do to help avoid new barriers . . . Suggested revision: After you have repaired the major accessibility barriers on your Web site, there are several things you can do to help avoid creating new barriers . . . Rationale: Somewhat clearer perhaps. These answers were last modified on 16 March 2006 at 01:50:03 U.T.C. by Jack Welsh Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/retro1-2006/ until 2006-03-16. Regards, The Automatic WBS Mailer
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