- From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2005 10:00:20 +0200
- To: r.castaldo@iol.it
- Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
Hi Roberto, Thank you for reading the documents and completing the WBS form. Since we are already clearly emphasizing the word "not" in the header of this section, re-emphasizing it in the last sentence may be too negative. Also, we are emphasizing the word "determine" in that sentence which I think has higher importance for the message we want to convey. Do you agree? WBS Mailer on behalf of <r.castaldo@iol.it> wrote: > --------------------------------- > Selecting Tools page > ---- > > > Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): > priority: [editor's discretion] > location: paragraph "What evaluation tools can not do" > current wording: Web accessibility evaluation tools can not determine the > accessibility of Web sites, they can only assist in doing so. > suggested revision: Web accessibility evaluation tools can <i>not</i> > determine the accessibility of Web sites, they can only assist in doing > so. > rationale: I'd like to put in evidence the word "not", in order to make > also visually clear the limitation we're talking about. Regards, Shadi -- Shadi Abou-Zahra, Web Accessibility Specialist for Europe Chair and Team Contact for the Evaluation and Repair Tools WG World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), http://www.w3.org/ Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI), http://www.w3.org/WAI/ WAI-TIES Project, http://www.w3.org/WAI/TIES/ Evaluation and Repair Tools WG, http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/ 2004, Route des Lucioles -- 06560, Sophia-Antipolis -- France Voice: +33(0)4 92 38 50 64 Fax: +33(0)4 92 38 78 22
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