[wbs] response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Involving Users in Web Accessibility Evaluation, 2005 October'

Here are the answers submitted to 'EOWG Call for Review: Involving Users in
Web Accessibility Evaluation, 2005 October' (Education and Outreach Working
Group) for Pasquale Popolizio.



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Support for Involving Users in Web Accessibility Evaluation
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 * ( ) I accept the Involving Users document as is
 * (x) I accept the Involving Users document, suggest changes below
 * ( ) I accept the Involving Users document only with the changes below
 * ( ) I do not accept the Involving Users document because of the
comments below
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)





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General comments on the resource suite as a whole
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Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
Hi Shawn, great work!

priority: [required for this version]
location: "Users' Experience Interacting with the Web", second paragraph,
second sentence
current wording: "For example, If you are developing a Web application to
be used"
suggested revision: "For example, if you are developing a Web application
to be used"
rationale: typo: "if" and not "If"


priority: [editor's discretion]
location: "Drawing Conclusions and Reporting", first paragraph, second
sentence
current wording: "However, it alone cannot determine if a Web site is
accessible; even large-scale usability studies cannot cover the diversity
of disabilities, individuals, and situations. "
suggested revision: maybe there is a broken link for "diversity"; maybe it
is http://www.w3.org/WAI/eval/Overview ?
rationale: typo: broken link (?)

regards
ciao

pasquale


These answers were last modified on 19 October 2005 at 16:46:15 E.S.T.
by Pasquale Popolizio

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/users-eval-1/ until 2005-10-20.

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