- From: <michaeka@wellsfargo.com>
- Date: Mon, 17 May 2004 15:01:25 -0700
- To: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
Hi, Judy - Just some minor edits: 1. "Overview" - second paragraph: For em dash, use character entity (—) instead of double hyphens (--). Looks more professional. 2. "Overview" - bulleted list: Delete "the" before WCAG 1.0, ATAG 1.0, and UAAG 1.0. It's not part of the title, and the list item then would begin with the title of the guidelines. 3. "Current Situation" - second bulleted list: Transition between the two clauses/sentences in each bullet could be more consistent - sometimes you use semi-colons and other times commas. 4. "Action Steps" - second paragraph: Should "Web Content Accessiblity Guidlines 2.0" be a link to WCAG 2.0? Regards, Blossom _____________________________________ Blossom Michaeloff Web Research and Design Wells Fargo 415.222.3045 michaeka@wellsfargo.com
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