- From: Shawn Lawton Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 23 Mar 2004 19:57:44 -0600
- To: <Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au>
- Cc: <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>, <H.Snetselaar@bartimeus.nl>
Andrew & Henk, Most updates are incorporated in: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/econ.html previous version is at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/econ-old.html comments surrounded by brackets ([...]) below. let me know if you want to discuss any of this. Best, ~ Shawn [discussed 5 march f2f, action: judy, send to EOWG list discussion of title] action: Q. Have we got the right "suite" title? It seems that we are not 'presenting' the case, but assisting a person/org to 'prepare/compile/build/compose/assemble' a case for accessibility. In the overview we talk about using the 'building blocks' as they apply in your situation. Suggest changing the title to "Building ..." (even though we changed from this on 7 Nov 03). We propose you do this as part of all these changes and then present to EOWG, rather than discussing in EOWG before implementing :-) URL: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/econ.html Financial Benefits Increased Web Site Use [prefer more simple language and parallelism] 1. can get more sales = can make more sales [prefer more simple language and parallelism] 2. can get more students = can aquire more students [prefer more simple language and parallelism] 3. can get more donations = can receive more donations [DONE] 4. [@@ maybe add "Increasingly, more older people are using the Web more and more. In some countries they are the fastest growing group of new Web users." (cut from social factors)] = Older people are inceasingly using the Web. In some countries they are the fastest growing group of new Web users. (Supported in Australia and Netherlands - uri's available.) Increases findability [DONE] 1. findabilityof Web pages = findability of Web pages [DONE, except for headings used 3.5] 2. Checkpoints - metadata = 13.2; alt-text = 1.1; headings = 12.3, 13.8 [DONE, except used "that" instead of "which" because is dependent clause] 3. weight to text marked up as headings = weight to text which is marked up as headings Increases potential use in more situations [DONE] 1. The "Enable the Content to Work on Different Devices" section of Technical Factors = The "Enable Content on Different Configurations" section of Technical Factors [DONE, plus 1.1] 2. display. The "Enable - insert 2 bullet points after 'display' that reference a) checkpoint 1.4, b) 2.1, 2.2 Increases usability [DONE] 1. present list of checkpoints here as a real list [DONE, plus more] 2. checkpoints are a) 13.4, b) 14.1, c) 13.1, d) 2.2, [DONE] 3. clearly labeled links = clear link text [DONE] 4. pages load faster (WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint x.x) = pages load faster (as discussed in "<link>access for people with low bandwidth</link>" in Social Factors) Increases positive image [DONE, with modified grammar] 1. Accessible sites can lead to positive image as the organization having a high sense of social responsibility, = Accessible sites can lead to a positive image as the organization demonstrate a sense of social responsibility. [deleted altogether] 2. and the positive image can increase an organization's Web site use. = A positive image can increase the use of an organization's Web site. [DONE - added bit about financial impacts] 3. [@@ link to specific relevant section in social factors, or expound on here, if not there @@ CSR has been shown to improve financial performance, enhance brand image and reputation, increase sales and customer loyalty, increase ability to attract and retain employees, and provide access to capital and funding. @@] = (See also the discusion about "<link>corporate social responsibility</link>" in Social Factors section.) Quantifying Benefits [DONE, deleted per 5 March f2f] chase Sailesh & Natasha for their contribution - URGENT Direct Cost Savings [DONE] 1. high attorney expenses = high legal expenses [DONE? added "(which includes relevant WCAG 1.0 Checkpoints)" since these are expounded on in technical should we not repeat here?] 2. Checkpoints a) 14.1, b) 3.3, c) 3.1, 3.1 Cost Considerations Initial Costs [??? not sure of issue. previous sentence says, "identify accessibility problems"- so this seems repetitive] 1. using accessibility evaluation tools saves = using accessibility evaluation tools to assist in identifying accessibility problems saves [DONE] 2. sometime use assistive = sometimes use assistive On-Going Costs 1. "Added..." = "Additional ..." > -----Original Message----- > From: wai-eo-editors-request@w3.org > [mailto:wai-eo-editors-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of > Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au > Sent: Thursday, March 04, 2004 10:44 AM > To: Shawn Lawton Henry > Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org; H.Snetselaar@bartimeus.nl > Subject: accessibility case - financial factors > > > > Installment #3 > > Q. Have we got the right "suite" title? It seems that we are not > 'presenting' the case, but assisting a person/org to > 'prepare/compile/build/compose/assemble' a case for accessibility. In > the overview we talk about using the 'building blocks' as they apply > in your situation. Suggest changing the title to "Building ..." (even > though we changed from this on 7 Nov 03). We propose you do this as > part of all these changes and then present to EOWG, rather than > discussing in EOWG before implementing :-) > > URL: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/econ.html > > Financial Benefits > Increased Web Site Use > 1. can get more sales = can make more sales > 2. can get more students = can aquire more students > 3. can get more donations = can receive more donations > 4. [@@ maybe add "Increasingly, more older people are using the Web > more and more. In some countries they are the fastest growing group of > new Web users." (cut from social factors)] > = Older people are inceasingly using the Web. In some > countries they are the fastest growing group of new Web > users. (Supported in Australia and Netherlands - uri's available.) > > Increases findability > 1. findabilityof Web pages = findability of Web pages > 2. Checkpoints - metadata = 13.2; alt-text = 1.1; headings = 12.3, > 13.8 3. weight to text marked up as headings = weight to text which is > marked up as headings > > Increases potential use in more situations > 1. The "Enable the Content to Work on Different Devices" section of > Technical Factors = The "Enable Content on Different Configurations" > section of Technical Factors 2. display. The "Enable - insert 2 bullet > points after 'display' that reference a) checkpoint 1.4, b) 2.1, 2.2 > > Increases usability > 1. present list of checkpoints here as a real list > 2. checkpoints are a) 13.4, b) 14.1, c) 13.1, d) 2.2, > 3. clearly labeled links = clear link text > 4. pages load faster (WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint x.x) = pages load faster (as > discussed in "<link>access for people with low bandwidth</link>" in > Social > Factors) > > Increases positive image > 1. Accessible sites can lead to positive image as the organization > having a high sense of social responsibility, = Accessible sites can > lead to a positive image as the organization demonstrate a sense of > social responsibility. 2. and the positive image can increase an > organization's Web site use. = A positive image can increase the use > of an organization's Web site. 3. [@@ link to specific relevant > section in social factors, or expound on here, if not there > @@ CSR has been shown to improve financial performance, > enhance brand image and reputation, increase sales and > customer loyalty, increase ability to attract and retain > employees, and provide access to capital and funding. @@] = > (See also the discusion about "<link>corporate social > responsibility</link>" in Social Factors section.) > > Quantifying Benefits > chase Sailesh & Natasha for their contribution - URGENT > > Direct Cost Savings > 1. high attorney expenses = high legal expenses > 2. Checkpoints a) 14.1, b) 3.3, c) 3.1, 3.1 > > Cost Considerations > Initial Costs > 1. using accessibility evaluation tools saves = using accessibility > evaluation tools to assist in identifying accessibility problems saves > 2. sometime use assistive = sometimes use assistive On-Going Costs 1. > "Added..." = "Additional ..." > > Henk & Andrew > _________________________________ > Dr Andrew Arch > Manager Online Accessibility Consulting > National Information & Library Service, Australia > Ph 613 9864 9222; Fax 613 9864 9210; Mobile 0438 755 565 > http://www.nils.org.au/ | > http://www.it-test.com.au/ | > http://www.ozewai.org/ > > Member, > Education & Outreach Working > Group, > W3C Web Accessibility Initiative > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/ > > NILS - A Joint Venture between the > Royal Victorian Institute for the Blind, The Royal Blind Society of > NSW, and Vision Australia Foundation. > > >
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