RE: DRAFT edits on BusCase - Policy

> HS >>Although the interpretation of the introduction, to my 
> opinion, leaves room for an application to a non-governmental 
> body, is it a good point to mention very clear that there is 
> something like an 'industry developed policy' that could be 
> applicable to web accessibility.

I wanted to keep that bit in the introduction as short and simple as
possible. Do you think it's enough here to say "... from governments and
other organizations..." (as currently rewritten at
http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/pol.html#intro ) since:
1. the primary focus for the legal & policy factors for a business case
are usually government policies, and industry-developed policies are
often recommendations, not requirements
2. industry-developed policies are clearly mentioned in both the main
sections.

> HS >> What about a link to the benefits to standards 
> harmonisation? ( In respect of complying to different  policies.) 

added to first question, added description to Related Resources at the
bottom

Thanks!!!

~ shawn

Received on Monday, 15 March 2004 13:06:23 UTC