Business Case - copyedits and references for SOCIAL

activtly = actively
in may areas = in many areas
if Web site were made accessible = if Web sites were made accessible
to afford, regular access  = to afford regular access
conducting business in ethically  = conducting business ethically
help incorporating social factors = help incorporate social factors

CSR - suggest additional list  levels:
  Does CSR exist?
      if yes:
          How does Web accessibility fit ...
      if no:
          Are there programs ...
          Would it be effective ...

funding. many organizations = funding. Many organizations
about CRS = about CSR
show have CSR impacts customers = show how CSR impacts customers

Credibility issues - we talked about providing supporting references from
3rd parties - need some (eg US and EU) for CSR stats "showing impact on
customers"

fluent in the language of the Web page = fluent in the language of the Web
site

benefit from the the text = benefit from the text
that also benefit people with low = that also benefits people with low
thus inceasing download speed = thus increasing download speed
download large multiimedia files = download large multimedia files
socioeconomic = socio-economic (3/4 instances)
cannot handle style sheets and accessible pages = cannot handle style
sheets; accessible pages
little opportunitty  = little opportunity

Related Resources - include WCAG1.0 as will be x-referenced many times

Access for Older People - (WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint 3.4)
Access for People with Low Literacy  - (WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint 14.2, 14.1,
14.3, 13.4)
Access for People with Low Bandwidth - (WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint 1.1, 3.1, 3.3,
14.3, 13.4, 13.1)
Access for New and Infrequent Users - (WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint 10.1, 13.3, 1.1,
14.3, 13.4, others?)

Also, while we picked up many typo's while reading this, we suggest using a
spell checker as we may have missed some.

Andrew & Henk
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Dr Andrew Arch
Manager Online Accessibility Consulting
National Information & Library Service, Australia
Ph 613 9864 9222; Fax 613 9864 9210; Mobile 0438 755 565
http://www.nils.org.au/ | http://www.it-test.com.au/ |
http://www.ozewai.org/

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W3C Web Accessibility Initiative
http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/

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and Vision Australia Foundation.

Received on Tuesday, 2 March 2004 17:20:59 UTC