- From: Harvey Bingham <hbingham@acm.org>
- Date: Sun, 04 Apr 2004 16:12:23 -0400
- To: "WAI Editors" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
1. Update copyright notices to end through 2004
2. References:
Add WCAG reference used herein, even though the overview general reference
section was removed.
3. Editorial Lint:
My meta:
XdeleteX _insert_
(P2) paragraph 2
(S1) sentence 1
(B1) bullet 1
B1 How concerned is the organization with cutting Web-related costs?
B1 ... or might it _be_ in the future?
B2 ... or might it _be_ in the future?
...alternat_iv_e
Financial Benefits
Increased Web Site Use
P2 S1 ... get more funding Xand demonstrateX _by demonstrating_
Increased potential use in more situations ...
S1. ...can _be used _ more easily Xbe usedX
Increases usability
P1 S2 ...their goals XwithX _effectiveXnessXly with efficiency_X,X and
satisfaction.
?what is viral marketing?
Direct Cost Savings
S2 ...(which _also_ includes ...
Decreases cost of translating
S1 B4 ...markup Xrather thanX _in addition to_
Regards/Harvey
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