Fwd: for EO editors list - Policy edit suggestions #1

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>From: "Andrew Arch" <amja@today.com.au>
>Date: Fri, 2 May 2003 23:11:54 +1000
>To: shawn@w3.org.au, jbrewer@w3.org
>Reply-To: andrew.arch@visionaustralia.org.au
>Subject: for EO editors list - Policy edit suggestions #1
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>Judy,
>
>A couple of copy-edit suggestions for the second (questions) section:
>
>1. accessibility current required
>=>
>accessibility currently required
>
>2. If certain guidelines are specified, then those guidelines should
>be met at at least the specified conformance level, and by the
>specified conformance date.
>=>
>All/Any specified guidelines should meet of exceed the specified
>conformance level by the specified conformance date.
>
>3. adequate to meet the need of people with disabilities
>=>
>adequate to meet the needs of people with disabilities
>
>Cheers,  Andrew
>
>
>Dr Andrew Arch
>Senior Consultant, Online Accessibility
>Vision Australia Foundation
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