RE: Privacy note for time out SC

Thanks David! No problem with your edit except I’d stick to legal counsels instead of legal advisors as you proposed.

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Subject: Re: Privacy note for time out SC

​Small grammar nits friendly amendment

Current proposal:
Privacy regulations may exclude preservation of user data until explicit user consent has been obtained and user identification has been authenticated. In case where the user is a minor, explicit consent may not be obtained in most jurisdictions. Consultation with privacy professionals and legal counsels is advised when considering data preservation as an option to approach this success criterion.

​Amended proposal:
Privacy regulations may require explicit user consent before user identification has been authenticated and before user data is preserved. In cases where the user is a minor, explicit consent may not be solicited in most jurisdictions. Consultation with privacy professionals and legal advisors is advised when considering data preservation as an option to conform to this success criterion.


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On Wed, Aug 16, 2017 at 10:32 AM, Alex Li (CELA) <alli@microsoft.com<mailto:alli@microsoft.com>> wrote:
+ WG for final review

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Subject: Re: Privacy note for time out SC

Hi - this seems fine to me on initial review. I think the plan was to put it on the group mailing list to flush out concerns before we start the CfC, so think that's the next step. Michael


On 15/08/2017 7:27 PM, Alex Li (CELA) wrote:
> My action item today is write a note about privacy for the data preservation portion of the SC. Please see below text. Editorial suggestions are welcomed.
>
> Privacy regulations may exclude preservation of user data until explicit user consent has been obtained and user identification has been authenticated. In case where the user is a minor, explicit consent may not be obtained in most jurisdictions. Consultation with privacy professionals and legal counsels is advised when considering data preservation as an option to approach this success criterion.
>
> All best,
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