Moving personlization forward - wording suggestion

Hi Folks 


Moving personlization forward - how about we  replace the second option in the current wording as follows:


contextual information is available for regions, common form elements, common navigation elements and common interactive controls is programmatically determined.




We would then specify what is included in common form elements, common navigation elements and common interactive controls in the definitions and make sure we have good supporting techniques for each one. 


Does that sound like a good approach?


Current wording:
      For pages that contains interactive controls or with more then one regions, one of the following is true: 
 a mechanism is available for personalization of content that enables the user to add symbols to interactive controls OR 
 contextual information or context sensitive help is availible for regions, form elements, main navigation elements and interactive controls is programmatically determined.