Re: Technology specific techniques

At 06:22 5/10/2005, Loretta Guarino Reid wrote:
<blockquote>
>The template we have been using and many of the proposed guide docs contain
>the following sentence:
>
>"For the technology-specific techniques, see the options for the technology
>you are using listed immediately below."
>
>I think it would be easy to read this to mean that only the listed
>technologies in the guide doc can be used, and I don't think this is what we
>intend. I'd like to suggest replacing it with the sentence
>
>"For the technology-specific techniques, see the options for the technology
>you are using."
</blockquote>

We could also write:

"For the technologies you are using, see the technology-specific techniques 
below."

Regards,

Christophe Strobbe


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Received on Wednesday, 5 October 2005 09:36:33 UTC