Subject: RE: passive vs active voice in May 9 Proposed reorganization

One other guideline could be adjusted

 

4-C2   [5.2]   Ensure that technologies relied upon by the content are
declared and widely available.

 

Rewrite: Technologies relied upon by the content are declared and widely
available.

 

David MacDonald

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       ...Barriers Disable Them

 

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Received on Thursday, 5 June 2003 17:00:53 UTC