- From: William Loughborough <love26@gorge.net>
- Date: Thu, 23 Dec 1999 06:25:04 -0800
- To: w3c-wai-gl@w3.org
I think the "Mission Statement" should say something like: "The WCAG are
the cornerstone of the WAI effort and provide the basis on which all the
other Recommendations depend: AU, UA, and ER." although it's heavily
addressed in section 9, might deserve up-frontness?
2.2 "documented in the Techniques document" might enjoy a better verb.
4 Deliverables #s 3 and 4 are implicitly contained or necessary for #2
to have happened so might be better included in #2.
Still think 5 is UA job - let's avoid a "jurisdictional dispute"?
8 might also be considered an integral/indespensible part of 2?
7. Schedule has "Working Drafts are available to the public, but a call
for public review has not been issued." something grammatically grating?
9.1 "Once PF has identified or worked through an accessibility barrier
with a group, we need to update our deliverables as accordingly."
grammar?
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