- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 17 Sep 2015 15:18:04 -0500
- To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
- Cc: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
Ref: https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/EOWG-3Sep2015/ Hi all, I was sick and missed a survey closing, so here are my answers. Sorry I didn't get them in the survey. *2. Resolutions of 04 September* (x) I was in the teleconference and I'm OK with them! *3. Tips - Changes for review* (x) I put comments below. 3.1 Tips - Writing - Changed titles for three consecutive tips that started with 'Provide' (GitHub #186) OK 3.2 Tips - Writing - Various editorial changes as outlined in GitHub #185, also related to GitHub #180 In 180 I suggested: "Consider providing a glossary for terms readers may not know." -> "Consider providing a glossary for terms readers might not know." Maybe that got missed? Personally, I strongly prefer "might" instead of "may" for grammar and *informality*; however, in the big scheme of things it's not a big deal, so I'm happy to let it go if others feel strongly. 185 seems to be in Developing and not yet implemented (e.g., <http://w3c.github.io/wai-quick-start/developing.html#associate-a-label-with-every-form-control> doesn't start with "Associate every form control with a label. This can be achieved using..." -- I was going to suggest changing "achieved" to "done") -- so I'm confused on this one. 3.3Tips - Writing - Piles of editorial tweaks from Shawn (GitHub pull requests) OK (I assume, I didn't look at how they were all edited :-) 3.4Tips - Writing - Alernative text - Added in a note to explain that alternative text is not normally visible (GitHub #188) For now: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/pull/255/files> For later: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/issues/188> 3.5Tips - Designing - Autoplay content - added example (GitHub 5199f5a) For later: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/commit/5199f5a> *4. Tips - Design of Examples* [I have commented elsewhere since then.] *5. Tips - Order and content for Learn More links* (x) I have reviewed the issue and added my comments to GitHub For now: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/issues/213> For now: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/issues/215> ### ~Shawn
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