EOWG Weekly Survey - 04 Sep 2015 - late completion

Ref: https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/EOWG-3Sep2015/

Hi all,

I was sick and missed a survey closing, so here are my answers. Sorry I didn't get them in the survey.

*2. Resolutions of 04 September*
(x) I was in the teleconference and I'm OK with them!

*3. Tips - Changes for review*
(x) I put comments below.

3.1 Tips - Writing - Changed titles for three consecutive tips that started with 'Provide' (GitHub #186)
OK

3.2  Tips - Writing - Various editorial changes as outlined in GitHub #185, also related to GitHub #180

In 180 I suggested:
"Consider providing a glossary for terms readers may not know."
-> "Consider providing a glossary for terms readers might not know."
Maybe that got missed? Personally, I strongly prefer "might" instead of "may" for grammar and *informality*; however, in the big scheme of things it's not a big deal, so I'm happy to let it go if others feel strongly.

185 seems to be in Developing and not yet implemented (e.g., <http://w3c.github.io/wai-quick-start/developing.html#associate-a-label-with-every-form-control>  doesn't start with "Associate every form control with a label. This can be achieved using..." -- I was going to suggest changing "achieved" to "done") -- so I'm confused on this one.

3.3Tips - Writing - Piles of editorial tweaks from Shawn (GitHub pull requests)
OK (I assume, I didn't look at how they were all edited :-)

3.4Tips - Writing - Alernative text - Added in a note to explain that alternative text is not normally visible (GitHub #188)

For now: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/pull/255/files>
For later: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/issues/188>

3.5Tips - Designing - Autoplay content - added example (GitHub 5199f5a)

For later: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/commit/5199f5a>

*4. Tips - Design of Examples*
[I have commented elsewhere since then.]

*5. Tips - Order and content for Learn More links*
(x) I have reviewed the issue and added my comments to GitHub

For now: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/issues/213>
For now: <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/issues/215>

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~Shawn

Received on Thursday, 17 September 2015 20:18:28 UTC