Re: [link correction] For review: Mobile pages updates

Unfortunately, because of other commitments I couldn't devote time to this :( but the changes look good. Please see my comments below for the discussion points.

On 30 Aug 2012, at 12:46, Shawn Henry wrote:

> Thanks to Vicki & Peter, we have draft updates and issues for discussion on the mobile pages.
> For discussion:
> * Do we delete all references to WCAG 1.0? Or move them after/under the 2.0 references (and maybe gray them out a bit visually) but leave them?

I think instead of deleting them, I would move them under the 2.0 references (gray them out is a good idea) and I would also add an explicit note saying that people should refer to WCAG 2.0 materials.

> * <> currently says: "Shared Web Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device Users and People with Disabilities lists web interaction that is similar by a user with a disability and by a user with a mobile device." Do we want to change that to something like "lists web interactions that present similar difficulties for a user with a disability and a mobile user" or does 'difficulties'  make it sound like the users' fault?

I think the current wording is simpler and better.

> For other changes, see:
> * - lists the changes
> * - edited version of the overview page
> * - edited version of the shared experiences page
> Feel free to send comments in e-mail and we will discuss them during the teleconference this week.

Yeliz Yesilada.

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