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Comments on "Web accessibility basics"

From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
Date: Fri, 01 Jun 2012 13:45:37 +0200
Message-ID: <4FC8AB61.40300@snv.jussieu.fr>
To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Dear all,
I just took time to read carefully through the latest draft of Web 
Accessibility Basics at:
My first problem is where to add comments in the wiki, if there are any. 
On the page, I see comments from Suzette and other notes entitled 
"review". So it is difficult for me to decide where I can add some 
I think we really need a consistent way to add comments and call for 
suggestion or reviews.
My second reaction concerns the overall structure of the document.
What "bothers" me is that "users, or people" are adressed on several 
places in the document and not at the same place.
you have a section "the Web is for all people".  Then further in the 
document, you have an h3 section "people". So when I just read this 
heading that belongs to "components" I assume I will read additional 
information about people using the web, but if I understand the 
paragraph correctly, it talks about people involved in web site 
development. In order to make this section clearer, I suggest that the 
heading "people" be more precise, such as for example "people involved 
in Web development or Web accessibility".
At last, in the section "business case", you find other information  
about users: the mobile users, and older users. Should they be 
mentionned in the section "the Web is for all people"?
I will join the call but will not talk too much as I lost my voice. I 
will try to contribute through IRC.
Talking to you later on the call.

Sylvie Duchateau
Association BrailleNet
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Received on Friday, 1 June 2012 11:45:27 UTC

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