- From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Fri, 01 Jun 2012 13:45:37 +0200
- To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Dear all, I just took time to read carefully through the latest draft of Web Accessibility Basics at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics My first problem is where to add comments in the wiki, if there are any. On the page, I see comments from Suzette and other notes entitled "review". So it is difficult for me to decide where I can add some comments. I think we really need a consistent way to add comments and call for suggestion or reviews. My second reaction concerns the overall structure of the document. What "bothers" me is that "users, or people" are adressed on several places in the document and not at the same place. you have a section "the Web is for all people". Then further in the document, you have an h3 section "people". So when I just read this heading that belongs to "components" I assume I will read additional information about people using the web, but if I understand the paragraph correctly, it talks about people involved in web site development. In order to make this section clearer, I suggest that the heading "people" be more precise, such as for example "people involved in Web development or Web accessibility". At last, in the section "business case", you find other information about users: the mobile users, and older users. Should they be mentionned in the section "the Web is for all people"? I will join the call but will not talk too much as I lost my voice. I will try to contribute through IRC. Talking to you later on the call. Best Sylvie -- Sylvie Duchateau Association BrailleNet Tél.: +33(0] 1 44 27 26 25 Fax : +33 (0) 1 44 27 34 49 Web : http://www.accessiweb.org
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