- From: suzette keith <suzette.skeith@gmail.com>
- Date: Fri, 25 May 2012 19:16:14 +0100
- To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAH7X45M0whanp0+1i4WEv7mHz0sCLUSAW8VoxbApxbFyzhfeEQ@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Shawn and all, Thank-you to Shawn - I agree with Helle the revised version is much more streamlined and easier to follow and to review. As agreed in Action 159 I have changed the example from the user stories to improve the range of access needs. Also I have added examples to the following section using material from Diversity of Users. I have tried to keep to functional needs in relation to web use and avoid a medical model of what and why. Are these reasonable examples to engage the interest of the intended audience of developers using WebEd? Basic Accessibility draft is at http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Basics_draft_2in section 1.2 Understand how people use the Web. Regards Suzette On 25 May 2012 12:31, Helle Bjarnø <jor@socialstyrelsen.dk> wrote: > I think this new draft2 is much better and find the new version from Shawn > much better. > Cheers > Helle > > Venlig hilsen > > Helle Bjarnø > Faglig konsulent, IT-tilgængelighed og synshandicap > > Direkte: +45 72 42 40 29 > Mobil: +45 41 73 08 02 > E-mail: jor@socialstyrelsen.dk > > SOCIALSTYRELSEN > Videnscenter for Handicap, Hjælpemidler og Socialpsykiatri > Landemærket 9 > 1119 København K > Telefon: +45 72 42 41 00 > www.socialstyrelsen.dk > > > > -----Oprindelig meddelelse----- > Fra: Shawn Henry [mailto:shawn@w3.org] > Sendt: 21. maj 2012 18:26 > Til: EOWG (E-mail) > Emne: Updated: Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics > > Hi all, > > First, reminders: > * The primary audience for this page is individual developers who are > already working in the field (as opposed to new students) (which is why the > business case is at the end) > * Approach: Briefly introduce key topics and documents, and encourage > readers to follow the links to read the docs. > * We'd like to use wording from approved WAI publications where it works, > rather than using lots of new wording on this page. (for consistency and to > shortcut additional vetting needed) > > I think we were starting to stray from these. Based on comments from Vicki > in the wiki and from Sharron via e-mail, and getting back to the approach > that we previously defined, I've take an edit pass at the document. Since > it is a fairly radical edit, I left the current draft as is and put the new > version in a separate wiki page at: > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Basics_draft_2 > > To make it easier to read, I also removed comments from that new version. > > Please review this edited Basics draft this week and either: > * add comments throughout the original page > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics > * add comments in the discussion tab of the new version > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Talk:Basics_draft_2 > * send comments in e-mail > > Let's see if we can get agreement on this page this week. > > Thanks! > ~Shawn > > > -------- Original Message -------- > Subject: Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics > Date: Mon, 14 May 2012 11:04:00 -0500 > From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> > To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org> > > > > Hi EOWG, > > Suzette and I have finished our edits from last week's EOWG teleconference > on the Web Accessibility Basics page at: > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics > > There are several points for review and comment marked in the document > with @@ Feel free to add your comments directly in the wiki page, or send > by e-mail if that's much easier for you. > > My edits are listed below: > > * Changed "Accessibility principles" to "Accessibility requirements" at > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Accessibility_requirements > * Added "Key resources" subhead under there and edited the text -- it > still needs work, though > * Added "{@@ review note: how can we make this section stronger? and > encourage people to read the principles page? ~shawn}" > > * Edited > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#The_essential_components_of_web_accessibility > (at the bottom of the page are previous drafts of that section: heading 2: > {@@[another version for consideration] Essential components - "the big > picture"} and heading 2: {@@ [a previous version] The essential components > of web accessibility} ) > > * For intro paragraph under "Understand how people use the Web" at > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Understand_how_people_use_the_WebI added some ideas after Suzette's edit. > > Cheers, > ~Shawn > > > > > >
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