- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 14 May 2012 11:04:00 -0500
- To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Hi EOWG,
Suzette and I have finished our edits from last week's EOWG teleconference on the Web Accessibility Basics page at:
http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics
There are several points for review and comment marked in the document with @@
Feel free to add your comments directly in the wiki page, or send by e-mail if that's much easier for you.
My edits are listed below:
* Changed "Accessibility principles" to "Accessibility requirements" at http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Accessibility_requirements
* Added "Key resources" subhead under there and edited the text -- it still needs work, though
* Added "{@@ review note: how can we make this section stronger? and encourage people to read the principles page? ~shawn}"
* Edited http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#The_essential_components_of_web_accessibility
(at the bottom of the page are previous drafts of that section: heading 2: {@@[another version for consideration] Essential components - "the big picture"} and heading 2: {@@ [a previous version] The essential components of web accessibility} )
* For intro paragraph under "Understand how people use the Web" at http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Understand_how_people_use_the_Web I added some ideas after Suzette's edit.
Cheers,
~Shawn
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