Re: updated: Business Case slides

  Based on comments in e-mail, the survey, and the teleconference, the following changes are made to the slides, dated 29 July:

* [broad view of accessibility] slide (5):
- Uses 23 July version of slide itself and the "Notes to presenters".
- Changed the text in the note area.
The previous slide says: " /[introducing next slide:] /To start with, accessibility gets you more website visitors. And accessibility enables more people to use your website."
This slide now says:
Here’s a perspective on the broad business benefits: /[read slide]
/This includes millions of people with disabilities *and others *that we’ll talk about in a little bit.
/[introducing next slide:] /The primary focus of accessibility is making the web work for people with the *widest range of abilities*.

* title slide 3: deleted " For the next 00 minutes,"

I also made some changes to the Instructions page in response to comments. I don't think any of the changes are really substantive.


On 7/25/2011 1:47 PM, Shawn Henry wrote:
> Based on the EOWG discussion on 22 July, I edited the [broad view of accessibility] slide (5), changing the slide a bit and the Notes significantly. After further input and thought, I was able to separate out the issues more clearly. Currently the purpose of that slide is introduce the first part of the presentation, not to have a compelling quote. So I've tried another revision to better meet the purpose and get rid of the quote issues. I look forward to your comments on how these work or might be further revised.
> The two drafts are available for review:
> * 25 July revision removing quotation aspects:
> * 23 July version with changes based on the 22 July EOWG decisions:
> Note that the latest version (which currently is the same as the 25 July one, but could change) will be at:
> Thanks,
> ~Shawn (with editor hat on)

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