Re: proposed new text for Ways People Browse in How People with Disabilities Use the Web

Hum, I meant to say *not exhaustive* of course.

Sorry about that.

/Denis


On 2011-03-24, at 10:37 AM, Denis Boudreau wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> Since this list is exhaustive, I think we need to reintegrate "some" in there.
> 
> Therefore, I'd suggest: "This page introduces some of the various techniques that people with disabilities use to access and interact with the Web, such as browser settings, text-to-speech, voice recognition tools, and many more."
> 
> /Denis
> 
> 
> 
> On 2011-03-24, at 9:59 AM, Cliff Tyllick wrote:
> 
>> An even more minor suggestion:
>> 
>> This page introduces the various techniques that people with disabilities use to access and interact with the Web, such as browser settings, text-to-speech, voice recognition tools, and many more.
>> 
>> Cliff Tyllick
>> Web development coordinator
>> Agency Communications Division
>> Texas Commission on Environmental Quality
>> 512/239-4516
>> ctyllick@tceq.state.tx.us
>>>>> Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> 03/24/11 7:32 AM >>>
>> A minor edit suggestion: This page introduces some of the different access techniques that people with disabilities use to interact with the Web, such as browser settings, text-to-speech, voice recognition tools, and many more.
>> 
>> On 3/24/2011 4:10 AM, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote:
>>> Hi Jennifer, All,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for addressing your action item!
>>> 
>>> One of the comments that was made is that while "voice recognition and "eye-gaze systems" sound so cool and exciting for some, they may also sound complicated (or even scary) for others. I wonder if we can tone this down a little?
>>> 
>>> Here is a suggestion based on some of your wording:
>>> 
>>> [[
>>> This page introduces some of the different access techniques, such as browser settings, text-to-speech and voice recognition tools, and many more that people with disabilities commonly use to interact with the Web.
>>> ]]
>>> 
>>> Best,
>>> Shadi
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On 11.3.2011 17:40, Jennifer Sutton wrote:
>>>> EOWG:
>>>> 
>>>> Via my action item from today's call . . .
>>>> 
>>>> From:
>>>> 
>>>> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Current link:
>>>> [link] Variety of Web Browsers
>>>> 
>>>> This will change, at least temporarily to:
>>>> [link] Ways People Browse
>>>> 
>>>> Current intro text:
>>>> - introduces some of the hardware and software innovations, such as
>>>> voice recognition,
>>>> eye-tracking, and other systems that people with disabilities commonly use.
>>>> 
>>>> Proposed change:
>>>> 
>>>> - introduces some of the different tools, such as voice recognition,
>>>> eye-tracking, and other access techniques that people with disabilities
>>>> commonly use.
>>>> 
>>>> Jennifer
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
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