- From: William Loughborough <wloughborough@gmail.com>
- Date: Thu, 26 Nov 2009 06:10:30 +0100
- To: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Cc: achuter@technosite.es, EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Perhaps a ToC? It would sort of detract from the "friendly narrative" aspect and make it more formal, but... Love. On Wed, Nov 25, 2009 at 9:40 PM, Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org> wrote: > Hi Alan, all, > >> I think it will be necessary to provide summary and orientation >> information to help people find which part is relevant to them. > > Anyone have thoughts or suggestions on this aspect? > > Regards, > Shadi > > > Alan Chuter wrote: >> >> This [1] looks like a rather ambitious document, but a very very useful >> one. Here are a couple of suggestions and minor corrections. >> >> Perhaps it would be a good idea to tell people to write down what options >> they change and where they found them, so they can undo the changes if they >> don't like the result. >> >> I think it will be necessary to provide summary and orientation >> information to help people find which part is relevant to them. >> >> I find that one of the easiest and most useful ways to improve the >> legibility of a Web page is to simply turn off CSS. Maybe we could include >> that too. >> >> Minor tweaks: >> "multimedia that is difficult to hear" could perhaps be "multimedia with >> sound that is difficult to understand". >> >> Under "Explore your computer system", "to meet many preferences" could be >> "to suit many preferences". >> >> Some typos: "Typing can be straneous", "Usign Voice Commands", "Alternate >> Mouse" (to "Alternative"). >> >> [1] http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/adaptive/strategies >> >> > > -- > Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ | > WAI International Program Office Activity Lead | > W3C Evaluation & Repair Tools Working Group Chair | > > -- http://www.boobam.org/webgeezermild.htm
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