- From: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
- Date: Wed, 25 Nov 2009 16:31:59 +0100
- To: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
This [1] looks like a rather ambitious document, but a very very useful one. Here are a couple of suggestions and minor corrections. Perhaps it would be a good idea to tell people to write down what options they change and where they found them, so they can undo the changes if they don't like the result. I think it will be necessary to provide summary and orientation information to help people find which part is relevant to them. I find that one of the easiest and most useful ways to improve the legibility of a Web page is to simply turn off CSS. Maybe we could include that too. Minor tweaks: "multimedia that is difficult to hear" could perhaps be "multimedia with sound that is difficult to understand". Under "Explore your computer system", "to meet many preferences" could be "to suit many preferences". Some typos: "Typing can be straneous", "Usign Voice Commands", "Alternate Mouse" (to "Alternative"). [1] http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/adaptive/strategies -- Alan Chuter Departamento de Usabilidad y Accesibilidad Consultor Technosite - Grupo Fundosa Fundación ONCE Tfno.: 91 121 03 30 Fax: 91 375 70 51 achuter@technosite.es http://www.technosite.es
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