- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2009 16:21:01 -0500
- To: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- CC: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Hi Shadi, To address your main point, I also added into slide 20: " Techniques for different situations. can use other techniques. " (In addition to the changes below, including: To slide 20 [Notes] I added [in bold]: "While WCAG 2 itself provides a stable standard for what users need, <strong>the Techniques provide flexibility in how developers meet users’ needs. There are different Techniques for different situations. And the Techniques are optional; you can use other ways to meet the WCAG 2 success criteria.</strong>" ") Let us know if this does not cover it. Thanks, ~Shawn Shawn Henry wrote: > Thanks for the comments, Shadi. Replies below. > > Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote: >> Hi Shawn, all, >> >> Not sure if this has been discussed yet: sometimes when talking to Web >> developers, the "design flexibility" aspect becomes quite important >> and I'm not sure that the slides address this sufficiently. >> >> First, the point in slide 21 "More design flexibility" is unclear (the >> notes do not clarify what the intention is). Also, all listed examples > > The preceding text to that slide says, "First let’s look at examples of > what WCAG 2 allows that WCAG 1 did not; that is, where WCAG 2 is less > restrictive than 1.0." > > The slide text says "WCAG 2 allows more movement within defined parameters" > > The notes for slide 21 say: "WCAG 1.0 limited movement used in web > pages, through the following checkpoints:... WCAG 2 allows more > movement, within defined parameters." > > How can we make it more clear? > >> are quite similar and may not be as convincing for some developers who >> do not use moving, blinking, or flashing content. > > To better show that this is just one example, I changed the slide title > from "More design flexibility" to "More design flexibility, e.g.:" > > The following slides show other examples of flexibility: > * Scripting allowed! > * Scripting Techniques > * Flexibility for rich Internet applications (Ajax, DHTML) > * Adaptability through accessibility-supported technologies > >> There are several other examples on a Success Criteria level that show >> the flexibility of WCAG 2. For instance "An alternative for time-based >> media or audio description of the prerecorded video content is >> provided for synchronized media" (SC 1.2.3) demonstrates design options. >> >> In other Success Criteria there are specific situations listed, or the >> requirements have been separated into different Success Criteria (such >> as the criteria for pre-recorded vs. live multimedia that are provided >> in different Conformance Levels). This all demonstrates flexibility. > > hum, I'm missing how these show flexibility. They seem to show more > preciseness -- that is, different requirements for different situations. > But that doesn't seem like flexibility. > >> However, more important for developers is often the flexibility on the >> techniques level. Often designers can select between different types >> of techniques to address an accessibility requirement. This >> flexibility is a significant benefit of WCAG 2 that deserves more >> focus (there is some mention of this in slide 15 but it does not come >> over clearly IMO). > > I bolded this point in slide 15 notes: "This is another aspect of the > flexibility of WCAG 2." > > To slide 20 I added: "While WCAG 2 itself provides a stable standard for > what users need, <strong>the Techniques provide flexibility in how > developers meet users’ needs. There are different Techniques for > different situations. And the Techniques are optional; you can use other > ways to meet the WCAG 2 success criteria.</strong>" > > Let us know if you think this doesn't cover it sufficiently. > >> So, to summarize my comments: >> >> #1. the notes in slide 21 are unclear (need to make the point clearer) >> #2. consider using other examples for slide 21 (or an additional slide) >> #3. consider adding a slide about flexibility of the "Success Criteria >> <-> Techniques" framework, and that different options are provided >> >> >> Best, >> Shadi >> >> >> Shawn Henry wrote: >>> EOWG, >>> >>> I have updated the "Benefits of WCAG 2.0" slides based on feedback >>> from today's teleconference[1]. See >>> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/slides/WCAG2_benefits-new.ppt >>> >>> (For those who didn't see today's agenda: changes from the previous >>> version are indicated in the Notes with ++changed.) >>> >>> These slides are now done, except for slide 8. Sharron will be >>> updating the HTML version next week. Therefore, if you have any >>> comments, it would be nice to send them *by Wednesday 24 June*. >>> Remember to send copyedits and things that do not require EOWG review >>> to wai-eo-editors@w3.org >>> >>> Notes on image alt:[2] >>> - The decorative images have no/null alt in both the ppt and the >>> html. They are noted in the Notes section. >>> - The logos have appropriate alt text. >>> - The color contrast screen capture's alt is "(screen capture >>> described in Notes section)". >>> - The screen capture of the Quick Reference has no alt; "Quick >>> Reference screen shot" is the heading of the slide (which is not >>> displayed); and there is a detailed description of the image at the >>> bottom of the Notes. This provides a detailed description without >>> interrupting the flow on the slide text and main notes. >>> - Slide 15 (Techniques document) & 27 (Understanding document) have >>> text in an image (because it matches the images used elsewhere, such >>> as http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/wcag20). Currently they have no alt, >>> and are described in detail at the bottom of the Notes. Putting the >>> description there lets us use formatting such as bullets and italics, >>> which would not be available in alt. >>> >>> Comments welcome on this approach to alt for these images. >>> >>> Thanks, >>> ~Shawn >>> >>> >>> [1] Changes on Friday 19 June: >>> >>> * updated the alt for images >>> >>> * moved the note to presenters about reading the slide text from >>> slide 4 to slide 2 >>> >>> * added to the slide "Cooperation with other [@@standards and >>> policies]": >>> Note to presenters: If there are policies that reference WCAG 2.0 or >>> directly relate to WCAG 2.0 in the organization, country, or other >>> area related to your audience, consider listing those on the slide >>> and mentioning the relationship. To find out about local policies, >>> you can: >>> - search in Policies Relating to Web Accessibility >>> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/Policy/> >>> - send an email to the WAI Interest Group (IG) mailing list >>> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/IG/#mailinglist> >>> >>> * added to the slide "Authorized Translations": >>> Note to presenters: If there are WCAG 2.0 translations in the >>> languages of your audience, consider including the link to the >>> translation(s) in the slide. >>> >>> [2] Instructions for adding alt to images is in the ppt Help... >>> however, I didn't figure out how to do it without the mouse. :( >>> >>> >>> >> > >
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