Re: For 3 Oct: Minor edits to WCAG 2.0 at a Glance

I didn't think it was broke, so I have no view on fixing it. All these
suggestions are "editor's discretion" items.

The main thing to remember is that there will be about a hundred people who
see it on a card for every one who accesses it online. The lasting
impression is that the Four Principles are sufficiently expanded in the
quick tips to serve our mission quite well. This is for people who until
they see this didn't really know what accessibility is, let alone how to
deal with it - now they know.

Love.

On Thu, Oct 2, 2008 at 7:00 AM, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:

>
> EOWG,
>
> We received the following suggestions for WCAG 2.0 at a Glance <
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG20/glance/>:
>
> 1. add a comma in:
> Make information adaptable, and available to assistive technologies.
>
> 2. don't bold the "and"s in:
> a. Provide captions and alternatives for audio and video content.
>  Provide <strong>captions and alternatives</strong> for audio and video
> content.
> b. Make information adaptable and available to assistive technologies.
>  Make information <strong>adaptable and available</strong> to assistive
> technologies.
> or Make information adaptable, and available to assistive technologies.
>  Make information <strong>adaptable, and available</strong> to assistive
> technologies.
> c. Help users navigate and find content.
>  Help users <strong>navigate and find</strong> content.
> d. Make text readable and understandable.
>  Make text <strong>readable and understandable</strong>.
> e. Help users avoid and correct mistakes.
>  Help users <strong>avoid and correct mistakes</strong>.
>
> Please send your comments on these suggestions to the EOWG mailing list
> before the teleconference.
>
> Regards,
> ~Shawn
>
>
> Shawn Lawton Henry
> W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> e-mail: shawn@w3.org
> phone: +1.617.253.8788
> about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/
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