Additional revisions on updated WAI Flyer

Hi All,

I have taken the comments from our discussion at our 20 October 
teleconference and tried integrating them into an updated version of the 
WAI Flyer. Please see the links below, and further down are questions for 
our discussion.

The issue on which we had the most debate last time -- the introductory 
paragraph -- did not seem clearly preferable one way or the other, so I 
created two documents so that we can compare the approaches.

You will find these at:
         http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/flyerfront5.en.html
and
         http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/flyerfront6.en.html

GENERAL CHANGES are indicated in the change log under "20 October 2006" at:
         http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-flyer.html

DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE TWO VERSIONS, in case they look the same to you:

* flyerfront5 <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/flyerfront5.en.html>
   - lists disability areas in introductory paragraph
   - mentions strategies, guidelines, and resources in the "participation" 
paragraph
   - breaks out the participation URI <www.w3.org/WAI/participation> on a 
separate line (note: this may or may not work on the actual graphic design, 
and we will need to re-test the design possibilities on this).
   - has the "supporting" line under activities

* flyerfront6:
   - mentions strategies, guidelines, and resources in the introductory 
paragraph
   - uses "develops accessibility solutions through a consensus process" in 
the "participation" paragraph
   - has the "supporting" line under resources, with slightly different 
phrasing

QUESTIONS FOR DISCUSSION:

   - Your preference on intro & participation paragraph phrasing -- and why?
   - Your preference on "supporting" placement -- and why?
   - Any other *burning* comments? -- otherwise let's wrap this...

Thanks!

- Judy


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Judy Brewer    +1.617.258.9741    http://www.w3.org/WAI
Director, Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI), World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
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Cambridge, MA,  02139,  USA

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