- From: Barry McMullin <mcmullin@eeng.dcu.ie>
- Date: Fri, 19 May 2006 13:11:41 +0100 (IST)
- cc: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
On Thu, 18 May 2006, Judy Brewer wrote: > 1. Introduction to WCAG 2.0 [very brief check] > * http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG20/intro.html > Focusing on: > - Does the introduction give a clear picture of what is in WCAG 2.0? > - Are there any parts that might be confusing for readers? I agree with Alan's comment about the overall navigation, and overloading of the phrase "table of contents". Maybe "Quick Table of Contents" should be "Contents of this page", or "Contents of this section" ... just anything to clearly distinguish it from the overall "Table of Contents". We probably need more hyperlinked glossary words; in this sentence: WCAG 2.0 covers a wide range of recommendations for making Web content more accessible. The guidelines do not include standard usability recommendations except where they have specific impact on accessibility. I think it would help for both "usability" and "accessibility" to link with glossary entries (where, presumably, the relationship between the two could be explained). The list following: The WCAG 2.0 document itself consists of: should presumably have exactly one hyperlink in every item? Only this document (WCAG 2.0) is normative. That is, only this document can be used for determining conformance to these guidelines. I'm not sure what this means; or that it is even accurate. The techniques document states: Some are sufficient to meet a particular success criterion ... from which it follows that, in at least some cases, the techniques *can* be "used to determine conformance". (Presumably what the WCAG 2.0 text is trying to explain is the strict legalistic point that *in cases of conflict* between WCAG 2.0 and anything else, WCAG 2.0 takes priority; but that is quite different from asserting that "only" WCAG 2.0 can be "used to determine conformance", which I think is, at best, confusing. Clearly, there will be any number of things, other than WCAG 2.0 itself, that will be "usable", in the practical, pragmatic sense, to "determine conformance"... The Working Group recognizes that readers who are new to accessibility may need or want additional information. For these readers, the work of the Web Accessibility Initiative and its Education and Outreach Working Group is highly recommended. The articles called Getting Started: Making a Web Site Accessible and How People with Disabilities Use the Web are especially useful. It might be better for this to appear earlier; that is, for readers who may land on this page via a fairly generic web search, we need an early statement that this page is part of a "technical specification" and is not suitable as an introduction to the general topic of web accessibility; and then point at the other introductory resources as above. The heading: The Four Principles of Accessibility might, I think be better re-phrased slightly: The Four Principles of Content Accessibility or: The Four Principles of Accessible Content but without the word "content" in there we lose track of the critical point that "accessibility" is a complex interaction of multiple components, of which content is only one. All for now, talk to you all shortly, Best - Barry.
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