- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 10:49:52 -0500
- To: barry.mcmullin@dcu.ie, "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
Hi, Barry, Thanks for reviewing the business case and completing the Call for Review. I implemented both of your suggestions described below: 1. in navigation, changed "Business Case" to "Business Case: Overview" 2. fixed typo and recorded them in the changelog at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/changelog#changes Best, ~ Shawn --------------------------------- Overview page ---- 1. Navigation within suite/wording change * priority: [editor's discretion] * location: Site/suite navigation panel, left column. (Repeat in all pages in suite.) * current wording: "Business Case" * suggested revision: "Business Case: Overview" * rationale: Early in my review I had navigated into one of the specific pages of the suite and wanted to get back to the overview (where I had started). I could use my browser back button, but that would not be effective for somebody who arrived via direct link (e.g., via search engine). It was not obvious to me that this first relevant item in the nav panel was the link I wanted (or, indeed, was a link...). The proposed revision is still brief, and consistent with the title element in the target page. SLH: done --------------------------------- Social Factors page 1. Wording change * priority: [suggested] * location: Social Factors in Developing a Web Accessibility Business Case for Your Organization, "Barriers to Web Use" section (http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/soc.html), third paragraph, fourth sentence * current wording: "The United Nations "Human Functioning and Disability" page includes links to data for different contrives." * suggested revision: "... countries." * rationale: typo SLH: fixed
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