[for EOWG teleconference] Re: Business Case proofing notes - more notes


Thank you for your thorough review of the Business Case, and for providing your comments and suggestions very clearly!

I incorporated almost all of them, and they are listed in sections B & D of my next e-mail to EOWG. There are a few that I did not incorporate, for reasons that I briefly explained in section C. Please let me know if any of these are "show stoppers" for you -- that is, if you think they need EOWG discussion at the teleconference before you would be comfortable signing off on the documents.

~ Shawn

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Received on Thursday, 11 August 2005 23:33:59 UTC