- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 21 Jan 2005 08:28:51 -0500
- To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Some comments for the discussion: 1. section 1.4 Relationship with other guidelines and standards. I strongly recommend: - deleting all of the first section and referring to http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/components. - leaving section 1.4.1 (with any relevant, non-redundant material from the paragraph 2 before that section) - leaving section 1.4.2 (with any relevant, non-redundant material from the paragraph right before section 1.4.1) 2. use of "format" versus something like "technical specifications" ? Glossary definition needs to be made more clear - perhaps just by adding examples. 3. In the success criterium, the terminology "must always conform" is awkward. Why not simple "conforms"? e.g.: - current: "At least one full-featured Web-based authoring interface must always conform to WCAG." - suggested: "At least one full-featured Web-based authoring interface conforms to WCAG." If concerned about "always", could put that in the preface text. ~ Shawn
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