RE: [components] updated, please comment Tuesday 28 Sept 2004

Shadi,

I understand your point, and I agree; however, I'm not sure it is worth
complicating the consistent structure and wording of the group of
bullets to include your point...

~ Shawn

> -----Original Message-----
> From: w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org 
> [mailto:w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Shadi Abou-Zahra
> Sent: Tuesday, September 28, 2004 6:27 AM
> To: 'EOWG (E-mail)'
> Subject: RE: [components] updated, please comment Tuesday 28 Sept 2004
> 
> 
> 
> Hello,
> 
> The document looks great!
> 
> ...but in section "The Implementation Cycle", I find the tone 
> a little too moderate ("more likely" etc). For example:
> 
> | When authoring tools make a feature easy to implement, 
> developers are
> | more likely to implement it in their content
> 
> might be better worded in terms such as:
> 
> | When authoring tools make a feature easy to implement, 
> developers will
> 
> | not need to manually implement it in their content
> 
> I don't necessarily like "manually implement" since they may 
> be using different tools for "partial remedy" but I hope you 
> understand what I'm trying to get at.
> 
> Regards,
>   Shadi
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org 
> [mailto:w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org] > On Behalf Of Shawn Lawton 
> Henry
> Sent: Tuesday, September 28, 2004 00:06
> To: EOWG (E-mail)
> Cc: public-wai-eo-site@w3.org
> Subject: [components] updated, please comment Tuesday 28 Sept 2004
> 
> 
> 
> EOWG,
> 
> I update the Components document, incorporating the items 
> from Friday's teleconference and from email.
> 	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/UCD/components
> changelog:
> 	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-components
> 
> I added back in the ALT example (with revisions based on 
> feedback from Shadi and Wayne) and added an image along with it.
> * Please send comments on the ALT image to the EO list
> (w3c-wai-eo@w3.org)
> * Please send copyedits on the other areas to the EO editors 
> list: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
> 
> If possible, please send comments by Tuesday 28 September so 
> that I can incorporate them for a  review in another group on 
> Wednesday.
> 
> ~ Shawn
> 
> 
>

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