- From: Carol at Kognitive.com <carol@kognitive.com>
- Date: Fri, 9 Jul 2004 09:00:00 -0500
- To: "EOWG W3C EOWG" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Couple comments (removed copyedit comments sent to Judy separately): 1. Introduction - recommended rewrites on 1st paragraph content: "Given the Web's increasingly important role in society, access to the Web is vital for people with disabilities. The Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) develops guidelines for accessibility of Web sites, browsers, and authoring tools. WAI then encourages implementation of these guidelines to make it easier for people with disabilities to use the Web. Many of the accessibility solutions described in WAI materials also benefit Web users who do not have disabilities." 2. Retiree with several aging-related conditions, managing personal finances Section needs more content possibly? Short compared to other sections though I have no suggestions. Discuss next week? 3. Motor disabilities (scenario -- "reporter") Add mention of using larger "targets" for links to help with coordination. 4. Aging-Related Conditions (scenario -- "retiree") Could mention using larger "targets" for links to help with coordination. Limited use of jargon might also be a consideration (age/knowledge gap). 5. About the Web Accessibility Initiative - change case of sentence: "W3C's Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) addresses accessibility of the Web through five complementary activities: a.. Ensuring... b.. Developing... c.. Developing... d.. Conducting... e.. Coordinating... Carol J. Smith ---------------------------------------------------- This mailbox protected from junk email by MailFrontier Desktop from MailFrontier, Inc. http://info.mailfrontier.com
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