- From: Sailesh Panchang <sailesh.panchang@deque.com>
- Date: Mon, 17 May 2004 10:38:53 -0400
- To: "EOWG" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <00a701c43c1c$adff7f50$a401a8c0@deque.local>
Hello Judy, The doc is Okay, but recommend the following changes: 1. "_recreation_ of Web accessibility guidelines": I suppose you mean re-creation or re-definition of Web accessibility guidelines. Right? But the most common interpretation attributed to recreation is amusement, entertainment etc. even dictionaries list these first . Perhaps you might like to use the term "redefining". 2. The h3 levels under Consequences: The heading "Organizations" is not really clear- to me until I read a line or two following it. The other headings are more suggestive of the content that follows. I suggest a slight change: Consequences ... is h2.; The h3 ones should be: On Web Developers On development of Authoring Tools On development of Evaluation Tools On Organizations On development of Browsers, Media Players, Assistive Technologies On Information Repositories Minor edits: 1. Spelling of browsers in "UAAG 1.0 describes how browers and" 2. "Different types of modifications, or fragmentation, of Web accessibility guidelines can have different impacts on Web accessibility efforts." Will "impact" (without the s be ok instead? Thanks, Sailesh Panchang Senior Accessibility Engineer Deque Systems,11180 Sunrise Valley Drive, 4th Floor, Reston VA 20191 Tel: 703-225-0380 Extension 105 E-mail: sailesh.panchang@deque.com Fax: 703-225-0387 * Look up <http://www.deque.com> *
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