- From: Carlos A. Velasco <velasco@fit.fraunhofer.de>
- Date: Thu, 15 Nov 2001 17:06:05 +0100
- To: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Hi all, These are my comments to the document: 1) Introduction - 2nd paragraph I would change the word "Web Services" for "Internet Services". Nowadays the term web services have some technical implications 2) Increase market share ... 1st paragraph: sentence 2 and 3 contradict among themselves somehow, I would make one with only a figure. * Improve usability for non-disabled and disabled visitors. "Text alternatives": replace "boon" (not common term for non-native) for benefit * Support for Low Literacy Levels. 1st paragraph: "... is not their first" replace by "is not their mother tongue" Regards, carlos -- Dr Carlos A Velasco mailto:velasco@fit.fraunhofer.de http://access.gmd.de/ Fraunhofer-Institut für Angewandte Informationstechnik (FIT.HEB) [Fraunhofer Institute for Applied Information Technology (FIT.HEB)] Schloss Birlinghoven, D53757 Sankt Augustin (Germany) Tel: +49-2241-142609/319272 Fax: +49-2241-142065
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