- From: Harvey Bingham <hbingham@ACM.org>
- Date: Fri, 18 Dec 1998 15:35:54 -0500
- To: Judy Brewer <brewer@w3.org>
- Cc: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
Suggested order 1. Intro -- Tim's piece 2. Latest news item teaser with date (to show site changes) 3. Mission -- brief, mention start and end time frame. Make separate from 4. Index/menu Authors User Agent builders Site evaluation and repair Training materials 5. WAI IPO: (bullets in there look like titles, even though they follow the material describing them. Instead, I suggest that the lead to each part start with run-in containing <A href="URL">...</a> for them?) I'd not set off the Technology stuff from the general and educational stuff preceding it. Some general and education is technical! I dislike using underline for anything other than to indicate an HREF. The color-blind may not make the distinction. Just omit the stylesheet entry for "tech", and the attributes class="tech" three places on H3: <H3 class="tech">...</H3> used on Technology development, Guidelines, and Tools. Styling just to be different shouldn't conflict with familiar patterns of use. 6. You Can Participate I feel that the title "Stay Informed, Get Involved" are passive ideas, as if done for the reader. They also presume the reader is already informed. How about "Learn more by participating", or Learn and participate" Omit reference to WAI Monthly Bulletin, or when and if there is one, put it in menu. 7. History As this grows, it may well be a pointer to a separate URL with the set of accomplishments. ---- As a general observation, we should start using XML principles of complete tagging (start and end tags). We might well precede each <H2...> and <H3 ...> by a <DIV> and close each with </DIV> at the appropriate place. Also, <BR/> and <IMG.../> indicate the close of otherwise EMPTY elements. Regards/Harvey
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