Re: Ref card - draft intro & closing

shortening

> [Intro]
> 
> Make Your Web Site Accessible:

I'd say "Tips to Make Your Web Site Accessible"
and remove the first sentence:

> Here are some tips from the World Wide Web Consortium's (W3C) Web
> Accessibility Initiative (WAI) on how to make your Web site accessible for
> people with disabilities. 

which doesn't add much.

> Having an accessible Web site means that your
> site can be used by millions more people around the world, and that it will
> also work better for everyone -- for instance people with mobile devices,
> lack of audio output, or low bandwidth. Try these for starters: 

I agree with Mike that millions and everyone sounds duplicate of each
other.

> [Closing]
> 
> Interested in learning more? Come to W3C's WAI home page, at
> http://www.w3.org/WAI, and follow links to the WAI Page Author Guidelines.
> You'll find specific ideas and techniques, and tips for testing your site
> to make sure everyone can use it. You'll also find information about other
> WAI activities and resources.

Visit http://www.w3.org/WAI and the complete WAI Page Author
Guidelines, where you'll find specific ideas, techniques, and tips to
make sure everyone can use your Web site.

Received on Thursday, 17 September 1998 10:54:03 UTC