Re: Ref card - draft intro & closing

Having read Judy's first pass and Mike's first suggestion,  I find myself
leaning towards Judy's version.  It seems more "people-oriented" than Mike's,
which has the feeling of focusing on the technology.  However, I agree with
Mike that there is something slightly awkward about the phrasing.  I don't
have
a suggestion at the moment, but I'll bet this group can come up with
something.

Cheers!
Chuck

At 16/09/98 11:51 PM -0400, Judy Brewer wrote:
>Draft intro & closing paragraphs for business-card sized reference card:
>
>[Well, here is one of my action items that's been pending a bit!]
>
>[Intro]
>
>Make Your Web Site Accessible:
>Here are some tips from the World Wide Web Consortium's (W3C) Web
>Accessibility Initiative (WAI) on how to make your Web site accessible for
>people with disabilities. Having an accessible Web site means that your
>site can be used by millions more people around the world, and that it will
>also work better for everyone -- for instance people with mobile devices,
>lack of audio output, or low bandwidth. Try these for starters: 
>
>[the mini-guidelines go here...]
>
>[Closing]
>
>Interested in learning more? Come to W3C's WAI home page, at
><http://www.w3.org/WAI>http://www.w3.org/WAI, and follow links to the WAI
Page
Author Guidelines.
>You'll find specific ideas and techniques, and tips for testing your site
>to make sure everyone can use it. You'll also find information about other
>WAI activities and resources.
> 
>
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>Judy Brewer    jbrewer@w3.org    +1.617.258.9741   
<http://www.w3.org/WAI>http://www.w3.org/WAI
>Director, Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) International Program Office
>World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
>MIT/LCS Room NE3-355, 545 Technology Square, Cambridge, MA, 02139, USA
> 
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