Re: my edits/comments on the latest doc.

Jan
I agree with most of these but...

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>1.2 Role of authoring tools in Web accessibility
>-While "Web Resources" makes sense the "Web Content" guidelines do still
>apply to those services, etc.

where we are referring to the WCAG we need to say content but I still 
think we need to move into working more openly and explicitly on all 
content - the word content does not nec. achieve this, unfortunately.

>1.3 How this document is organized
>-I'm confused about the meaning of the first comment "I think the
>integration you want..."

???

>Checkpoint 2.1:
>- For Success Criteria 1., "accessible" should not be there.
>- Why "relevant" over "appropriate"? Relevant is probably harder to
>define.

I think that relevant means that there is something that relates to 
it whereas appropriate means if you think you want to use it - or 
something...

>GUIDELINE 3: INTRO TEXT:
>-"ideosyncratically" seems awkward here.

yes - I was struggling to find a word that would do - I was thinking 
of unpredictably - perhaps... - or not anticipated

>Checkpoints 3.1/3.2/3.3/3.4:
>- I am still looking for feedback on my discussion about collapsing
>these into a new, more general checkpoint (see
>http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-au/2002OctDec/0020.html)
>- Not sure about "implore" in 3.4.
>- Do you have a definition for "Reasonable Author" and "Moderately
>Expert"?

beg?? invite is a bit gentle but might be OK

Liddy

Received on Thursday, 7 November 2002 17:02:54 UTC