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Re: Comments on 22 June Version...

From: Joseph M. Reagle Jr. <reagle@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 25 Jun 2001 14:51:08 -0400
Message-Id: <4.3.2.7.2.20010625144353.00b28c30@localhost>
To: "Donald E. Eastlake 3rd" <dee3@torque.pothole.com>
Cc: w3c-ietf-xmldsig@w3.org, Brian LaMacchia <bal@microsoft.com>
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At 22:52 6/24/2001, Donald E. Eastlake 3rd wrote:
>Section 4.3.1: one occurance of "CanonicalizationMethod" has the
></code> before, instead of after, the last letter.

Fixed.

>Section 4.3.3.2: In both the DTD and Schema, the "stylesheet" element
>should occur in addition to the "XPath" element.

I think you mean 4.3.3.4? We dropped the XLST element, <stylesheet> can be 
included by the app.
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-ietf-xmldsig/2001AprJun/0025.html

>Section 4.4: The first three in the list of Type URIs is missing the
>colon (":") after the "http".

Fixed.

>Maybe I'm just missing something but why, in 4.4.3, does it say that
>keying information obtained by a RetrievalMethod "may need to be
>canonicalized"? Even if the KeyInfo is signed, the signature is over
>the RetrievalMethod element and content, not over what is retrieved,
>right?

I think this is because you "may" sign the data obtained by RetrievalMethod.

>Section 4.4.5: Seems a bit odd in just saying that PGPKeyID is a
>string.  Actually, I belive, PGPKeyID's are 8 octet binary quantities
>so it would seem like it should say they are Base64 encoded...

I'm not sure. Brian?

>Section 7.3: At the end, the last points two numbered don't seem
>connected to the rest of the text.  Suggest preceeding them with "To
>avoid these problems, applications may need to:" or the like.

Done.



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