- From: Cyrus Daboo <cyrus@daboo.name>
- Date: Mon, 09 Mar 2009 13:15:58 -0500
- To: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>, WebDAV <w3c-dist-auth@w3.org>, vcarddav@ietf.org
Hi Julian, --On February 25, 2009 4:13:24 PM +0100 Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> wrote: > below are some comments on draft-ietf-vcarddav-webdav-mkcol-03: > > Section 1., paragraph 2: > s/proposes/defines/ Fixed. > Section 2., paragraph 4: > Actually, I'd recommend to just borrow the relevant paragraphs from > <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5323#section-1.4>. See also older message > from Nov 2008: > <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/vcarddav/current/msg00702.html>. OK - I replaced the existing text with that from 5323 almost verbatim. > Section 3., paragraph 2: > s/MAY/may/ - this doesn't deserve RFC2119 terminology; there may be > similar places... Fixed. > Section 5.2., paragraph 5: > (illegal DTD syntax) Fixed. > Section 9., paragraph 5: > You want to cite: <http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-20081126/>. Fixed. -- Cyrus Daboo
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